Writing Where's Troy

My goul from last term is Engaging my audience using appropriate language features (e.g. similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia and imagery).

Walt entertain

Where's troy he's  not here woohoo  the most evil teacher is not here but where is he .

don't be silly there are no such thing as mermaids.

 Even if he was a zombie he would eat the most awesome one last . He probably  just slept in no way he has like 5 clocks no one can sleep through that.

Really I thought pirates where extinct .

suddenly the door open and a person walked in a strange character that was socking wet with a parrot on his shoulder he had skin that was all wrinkly and zombiefide the person walk over to us and said kids get out your book out.