Thursday 27 March 2014

Maths




My next steps...
I think nexts time I should go  a bit slower by taking my time and re-cheek over my work a third time .



Clay art

W.A.L.T to make things with art


I am Proud of my clay because . . .  I put  a lot of texture in my clay with the tooth brush


Something I found challenging was  . . .  It was very hard take all of the craks out of the clay


The thing I enjoyed the most was . . .getting to make a bear holding a iPad 

Today I learnt . . . How to stick clay together with vinegar


Next time . . . I will tri to mold the cay faster so the clay won't crak 





Camp witting





As we were tiptoeing Through the bush I herd screaming there were chills running down my back. I kept on Walking then sudinly there was a hooooot in the bush people were screaming. The only thing we could see is the lelfs on the trees and on the ground 
and the tree roots. lIttle holes of light peeked through the branches of the trees like fireflies. I felt like I wouldn't be scared because I don't scare easily but when NIck 
hooted like an owl, I screamed like a banshee. Aaaaaahhhhhh!!! Everyone around me 
was screaming as well. It sounded like they almost had a heart attack. When we got out  I said to my friend I won't to do that again!!!




Tuesday 18 March 2014

Camp witting




Partner coment 
Feedback: I like the way you have used expert ion in your writing
Feed forward: I think you could make the reader want to read more by adding some metaphors and some personification.

Camp witting





Partner coment : I like how you have put some verbs and ad verbs. Next time you can try and add more detail.

Wednesday 5 March 2014

WALT: set smart goals

In class we are setting smart goals for camp 
We wrote in our camp diarys
Her is mine

First we had to think of goals we had not set then we had to write it in our day books and show the goals too our teacher if thay liked them we could put them into our camp diarys



What my camp gouls How by looking at my goals every day and thinking about how to set them why to set them when at camp

Partner coment :  you have how you did it and the when what how why and who