Dog Trainer

On the 2nd of July 2010 a dog trainer came to my house to train my stupid dog Tom its not that I don't like him he but he always eats my shoes and he once ate a bird hole feathers beak and the feet GROSS!!!! . Any way we're was I oh yeah the dog trainer.

 So the dog trainer came and said that dog is to fat he needs to go on a diet that's not very nice tom has feelings you know he could here you any way first the dog trainer got a ball and said fetch boy but Tom just sat there looking at me like he's saying what's going on The trainer says you are such a useless dog. Ok that's it I will come back tomorrow to give him a walk Toms eyes widen and he starts to smile .

 The next day the dog trainer came back and got a leash for Tom but I don't trust her with me little baby so I when with and luck I did because the second Tom got out of the house he run for the hills and dragged the dog trainer with though the park around the trees then back home. When we came back I bent down and said good boy as the dog trainer crawled back to her van.   

Here are the real pitchers of the dog from the story.

The 13 Story Treehouse On Minecraft

WALT: Create via Collaboration

Description:

What are we doing?  

In my reading class we are making the 13 story treehouse in minecraft. Because troy read us the story the 13 story treehouse by Andy Griffis and we got inspired to make our own twist in the world .

Why are we doing it?

We are doing this to prepare ourselves for the future and show that Russell street school is most creative school ever and we think it will be really fun. 

How are we doing it? Every week each group gets 40 minutes on the world to build rooms and objects from the book.

Who is in my group? In my group there is me Grace C  Talyer W  Rileigh L and Calais .

What is your group building? My group is building Terry's Room , the See-Through Swimming pool and the Bowling Alley .

Where do we do it? We are building it in the teachers office where we can focus in a quit atmosphere .

How often do we do it? Once a week every week

Positive: (What are the good things about doing this?) it's a creative way of learning and it's really fun

Minus: (What are the tricky or not so good things about doing this?) Because we work in a group some times it hard for us to  agree 

Interesting: (What is something that you find interesting about this Eg: Not good or bad) it's interesting that no groups project will be the same. It's all very individual.

Pangrams

In writing my goal is to Generating Ideas so we tried to make the smallest pangram using all the letters in the Alphabet the smallest is the quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog .

Here's the one me and my friends made

Term 3 Reflection

This is my term 3 reflection 

Inquiry Sample

W.A.L.T: Gather Information

Description

Eb (dress from around the world)-
Every Wednesday we have been learning about the inquiry process while finding out about different cultural dress from around the world. The first stage of an inquiry is to gather information ‘Get It’. First we chose a culture we wanted to find out more about and then started researching 

Evaluation:

1. What are you most proud of? I am most proud of that I did a lot of research and I think me and my team worked well together.

 2. What did you find challenging?i founded challenging knowing if the research was right or not.

 3. My next ‘Get It’ goal is? My next goul is to get more information and not rush in to things. 

Writing Where's Troy

My goul from last term is Engaging my audience using appropriate language features (e.g. similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia and imagery).

Walt entertain

Where's troy he's  not here woohoo  the most evil teacher is not here but where is he .

don't be silly there are no such thing as mermaids.

 Even if he was a zombie he would eat the most awesome one last . He probably  just slept in no way he has like 5 clocks no one can sleep through that.

Really I thought pirates where extinct .

suddenly the door open and a person walked in a strange character that was socking wet with a parrot on his shoulder he had skin that was all wrinkly and zombiefide the person walk over to us and said kids get out your book out.

Fluency: Money Truck Crashes

WALT:  Fluency - read accurately, with expression and understand what we read.

Task: Respond to the article you have just read using full sentences.

Description: We have been reading articles from around the world about peculiar news.

An armoured truck overturned on a highway in Rhode Island, USA,  causing bags of money to spill all over the road which quickly caught the attention of other drivers.

Police say the driver lost control and the truck swerved off the highway onto the grass and tipped onto its side.

Both the driver and the other person in the truck received cuts and bruises and possibly neck and back injuries.

The money was in clear plastic bags and canvas duffel bags and the scene of the accident was soon swarming with passers-by but police are unsure whether any money was taken.

A second truck was called and the money was transferred as police supervised and kept passers-by away from the scene

1. Who is the main person or group of people in this news article? The main people truck driver and the police

2. What was the key event from the news article? The key event is when the money truck crashed and money pored out

3. Where did this event take place? The crash took place in Rhode Island, USA

4. When did this event take place? The event took place on the 2nd of September 

5. Why did this event happen? Police say the driver lost control and the truck swerved off the highway onto the grass and tipped onto its side.

Evaluation:

1. What do you think is the best part of the article? I thought the best part was the end because it  was funny when the article said ,police supervised and kept passers-by away from the scene I thought it was funny because the police

2. What was the hardest part about completing this portfolio sample? The hardest part was Answering the questions because you had to put them all in to sentence.

3.  Next time, what is a goal you can work towards? next time my goal is to answer the questions with more power 

  I did the yellow target because I didn't put power in to my answers and that's what makes a good answer/sentence.

     

       

Feedback/Feedforward:  like you said you can put more power in to the the answers  and have more full stops but other then that I like you post a lot inara :)