Sunday 7 September 2014

Fluency: Money Truck Crashes


WALT:  Fluency - read accurately, with expression and understand what we read.
Task: Respond to the article you have just read using full sentences.



Description: We have been reading articles from around the world about peculiar news.

An armoured truck overturned on a highway in Rhode Island, USA,  causing bags of money to spill all over the road which quickly caught the attention of other drivers.
Police say the driver lost control and the truck swerved off the highway onto the grass and tipped onto its side.
Both the driver and the other person in the truck received cuts and bruises and possibly neck and back injuries.
The money was in clear plastic bags and canvas duffel bags and the scene of the accident was soon swarming with passers-by but police are unsure whether any money was taken.
A second truck was called and the money was transferred as police supervised and kept passers-by away from the scene



1. Who is the main person or group of people in this news article? The main people truck driver and the police

2. What was the key event from the news article? The key event is when the money truck crashed and money pored out

3. Where did this event take place? The crash took place in Rhode Island, USA

4. When did this event take place? The event took place on the 2nd of September 

5. Why did this event happen? Police say the driver lost control and the truck swerved off the highway onto the grass and tipped onto its side.


Evaluation:

1. What do you think is the best part of the article? I thought the best part was the end because it  was funny when the article said ,police supervised and kept passers-by away from the scene I thought it was funny because the police

2. What was the hardest part about completing this portfolio sample? The hardest part was Answering the questions because you had to put them all in to sentence.


3.  Next time, what is a goal you can work towards? next time my goal is to answer the questions with more power 

  I did the yellow target because I didn't put power in to my answers and that's what makes a good answer/sentence.




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Feedback/Feedforward:  like you said you can put more power in to the the answers  and have more full stops but other then that I like you post a lot inara :)


1 comment:

  1. What a crazy article huh Charlotte, what would you have done if you were there. You show a good understanding of the article and answered the questions using good words but they could have been a bit more detailed.

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