WALT: inform
It all started with a man called Sir Isaac Newton born January 4, 1643 he was an expert in Physics.
One day he fond two new tips of energy called kinetic and potential energy . When he went to his village to tell everyone about it but no one believed he so he made a contraption and called it the newtons cradle the way it works is you pull one ball up and let it go and then the last ball at the end will go up.
DESCRIPTION I have leant that there is more then one tip of energy like kinetic and potential.
What? We are publishing a piece of writing.
I did the yellow target because I could have finished before die line.
Comment: great story Charlotte I like the detail you put in it maybe more juicy words next time.- Lili
Why?, To share on our blog and during our Student Led Conference.
When? Week 6
Who? The World
I did the yellow target because I could have finished before die line.
Comment: great story Charlotte I like the detail you put in it maybe more juicy words next time.- Lili
Great intro Charlotte but you don't explain what potential and kinetic energy are. Maybe next time remember focus more on your learning intention to give the readers what they are after.
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